jk. XXNX The grammar was good and the punctuation was good, too. Got yourself a proofreader? Maybe by blackmailing her not to rat her out in exchange for a life of servitude or something like that.Anonymous readerReport 2008-05-28 12:56:19u suck… jk. PLEASE KEEP WRITING, YOUR STORIES ARE GOOD.purbratReport 2010-03-23 02:43:17I enjoyed this story! this is a good story«123» Got yourself a proofreader? this is a good story«123» Maybe by blackmailing her not to rat her out in exchange for a life of servitude or something like that.Anonymous readerReport 2008-05-28 12:56:19u suck… this is a good story«123» prt 1 was great!Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-24 16:18:38Personally I would have liked it more if she had been able to travel back home and get revenge on her sister. Story #2 was just as GOOD as the first. You did GREAT! You did GREAT! The grammar was good and the punctuation was good, too. The
