10 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-08-05 13:06:45Storyline was good but the quality of the story was poor due to the poor grammar. Recommend you spellcheck and proofread this story and repost it.anonymous readerReport 2012-06-01 10:49:12While the story’s plot is fine, the grammar and the writing quality is very poor. XXX I recommend that you take the time to spellcheck and proofread your work before posting it online. I recommend that you take the time to spellcheck and proofread your work before posting it online. Also, I see some people are claiming that you “stole” this story. Also, I see some people are claiming that you “stole” this story. I recommend that you take the time to spellcheck and proofread your work before posting it online.
