I mean, you have them alone for a 3 day weekend and the sex is a quick BJ and a quick fuck that lasts only a couple of sentences total. Many misspelled words (i.e.you used “of” instead of “off” twice, “…sitting in my bead(sic)”, “gourgeous” instead of “gorgeous”, “waste(sic) band” instead of “waist band”, etc. XXX Needs more detail. I mean, you have them alone for a 3 day weekend and the sex is a quick BJ and a quick fuck that lasts only a couple of sentences total. “walking up the the living room.” , “…gave my(sic) a boobjob”, “…what were were doing…”
This is pretty pitiful writing even if you are only 14.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-30 00:30:15Started out great and then you tried like hell to end it in half a paragraphanonymous readerReport 2013-11-30 00:29:54Started out great and then you tried like hell to end it in half
