You can work into the omniscient and show the scene, then revert to his angle. XXX I got to school for literature and writing and he insults some of the best work. Keep it up!«1» I got to school for literature and writing and he insults some of the best work. You can work into the omniscient and show the scene, then revert to his angle. 1/10READERReport 2005-10-09 15:58:48Miker’s an ass, don’t listen to that little fuck. Well done, make it longer. Give more detail..More of his emotions about it. Keep it up!«1» Or you can switch into the body of one ofn the girls.READERReport 2005-10-09 02:20:22Fuck you Miker! 5 comments«1»READERReport 2006-01-22 23:17:16SEQUEL!!!READERReport 2005-10-11 11:08:58well, thank u for commenting,
and @ yoyoyo, i’ve given me quite an idea, ill try and write something like that, have to talk to ‘cherie’ bout that :)READERReport 2005-10-10 00:15:53It was a piece of shit.
