You did fairly well though, at least you didn’t put the entire thing into one WALL of print. Short paragraphs with a double space between them really makes a story much easier to read. XXNX lol is it true or a fantasy cause im 22 and i kinda feel bad for u if its trueAnonymous readerReport 2010-03-24 08:34:57Nice story. Lainiedonb9033Report 2010-03-23 00:29:36Sweetie, it’s a very, very hot story, but you should check out some other stories on this site to look at format. Many people will not even look at a story once they see that. You did fairly well though, at least you didn’t put the entire thing into one WALL of print. Yes you should keep on writing. It appears that you have promise. 4 comments«1»edmondlReport 2016-04-21 03:24:45True or fantasy keep writingAnonymous readerReport 2010-05-09 15:59:01wtf is this why does all this sound weird… I know this is your
