Nice work!«12» But great story otherwise. XXX All that blood and gore was totally unnecessary. Nice work!«12» All that blood and gore was totally unnecessary. I don’t think that you know what you are writing about. Very disappointing.anonymous readerReport 2011-05-09 01:09:54Umm… I’d like to see her do it with some of the other animals also. All that blood and gore was totally unnecessary. I have seen dogs mate many times and have NEVER seen a male dog draw blood from his mate. Using the wrong word changes the meaning of the sentence drastically. I don’t think that you know what you are writing about. I’d like to see her do it with some of the other animals also.
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Jack Vegas / Lily Lane
