. XXNX 17 comments«1234»Anonymous readerReport 2016-05-19 17:34:34Your a such a ass go post your own stories if u wanna be critical on some one else project who are you to judge . . no oneAnonymous readerReport 2016-01-21 11:09:00Besides, those are NOT spelling errors but grammar errors, and no spell-checker I know of will find those. . . Great story even with the errors.Anonymous readerReport 2016-01-15 04:20:28Dude if your going to spell-check someone else’s story than go write your own story and don’t worry about all of the little mistakes in his. Even with the little typos this is still an amazing story.Anonymous readerReport 2015-09-23 22:02:35I laughed at myself more than the situation, “I figured that would be the case as I did it to myself but moving too fast through air. . You might try finding a Proof-Reader to help avoid this problem.










