Even though it didn’t have any sex it in it, it was still extremely good! You need to kill him off and let her find her mother.«12» One request–please “don’t take the girl.”READERReport 2007-02-17 21:43:25hey i loved it ! Xnx Grammar could use a little work though. And to the commenter named Zatch2, it’s not “Definatley, it’s “Definitely.” Learn how to spell before sounding like a writers critic.READERReport 2007-02-17 04:33:43Definatley needs a conclusion. Grammar could use a little work though. 6.5/10READERReport 2007-02-17 01:36:06There is such a thing as a spell checker…USE IT!!! 8 comments«12»READERReport 2007-06-12 13:02:38Go Marines! One request–please “don’t take the girl.”READERReport 2007-02-17 21:43:25hey i loved it ! Even though it didn’t have any sex it in it, it was still extremely good! Keep it up and please continueREADERReport 2007-02-17 06:05:20Let’s face it, and I’m not being mean to the author: This is a very average story.
