1 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-06-17 08:41:07don’t take this as a crititicsm or a thumbs down on your story. Xnx oh and like other first time writer’s. but labling is important. 1 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-06-17 08:41:07don’t take this as a crititicsm or a thumbs down on your story. i’m bored by incest. 1 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-06-17 08:41:07don’t take this as a crititicsm or a thumbs down on your story. your perspective need’s work. look up story perspective what little i skimmed had a hercky jercky cadence. your perspective need’s work. and i’m inclined to give a negative vote for unlabled or mis labled stories.but i don’t for first time writer’s. but labling is important. your perspective need’s work. there’s plenty of writing 101 on the internet.«1» your perspective need’s work. oh and like other first time writer’s. there’s plenty of writing 101 on the internet.«1»
