Maybe a little anti-climatic. XXNX .(Whatever that means?)
Since this was posted 7 yrs ago, I feel my comments are mute; doubtfully U can learn anything from them, except that yrs later U can see that in Ur early efforts, U showed promise. 4 comments«1»Rex AllenReport 2024-04-26 04:18:53I loved the entire story. Keep them coming.anonymous readerReport 2010-08-27 05:37:00Nice plot..you are getting better Darklord«1» Hopefully U have progressed beyond amatur. yet from time to time review Ur earlier efforts for encouraging comments such as this. I have started to re-read some stories again, getting more detail.Dudley DowrongReport 2018-07-18 09:24:48Agree with the 2 comments. .(Whatever that means?)
Since this was posted 7 yrs ago, I feel my comments are mute; doubtfully U can learn anything from them, except that yrs later U can see that in Ur early efforts, U showed promise.
