The only serious complaint I really have is Andy introduces himself as ‘Anthony Carpenter’, but at the end, Emily calls him Mr. XXNX Now, I don’t know how much Emily knows of her apparent future brother-in-law, so this can probably be passed off as an unknowing girl trying to be formal with his nickname. Andrew Carpenter’. So I say keep up tha good stories!«12345» Now, I don’t know how much Emily knows of her apparent future brother-in-law, so this can probably be passed off as an unknowing girl trying to be formal with his nickname. So I say keep up tha good stories!«12345» The only serious complaint I really have is Andy introduces himself as ‘Anthony Carpenter’, but at the end, Emily calls him Mr. But in the future, try to be careful about confusing things like names…bad spelling and grammar I can forgive, but a
