hard to keep interested? Xnx this was a pretty good story, good detail, short stories are seldom very interesting, mostly missing important detail, or not expanding enough on subjects that could make it better. this was a pretty good story, good detail, short stories are seldom very interesting, mostly missing important detail, or not expanding enough on subjects that could make it better. Stories with sex is wat its supposed to be & not the other way round..ppl here dont the point i guess. …keep up the good work looking forward to a equally fantastic series…good luck…write fast;)«12» hard to keep interested? this was a pretty good story, good detail, short stories are seldom very interesting, mostly missing important detail, or not expanding enough on subjects that could make it better. 8 comments«12»READERReport 2008-03-25 19:26:26fantastic, ingore the comments about the british lingo, that guy’s obviously a complete joker.
