You did a wonderful job of handling the dialogue, which is something that a lot of writers have problems with. XXNX Your story was very well thought out. Nice storyAnonymous readerReport 2012-10-31 00:09:37Hello Stranger92 (This is the second part to my comment)
You did a great job of dividing your story into correct paragraphs, which makes it a lot easier to read. I was enjoying the story so much it made me sad to reach that point. 16 comments«1234»Anonymous readerReport 2016-05-02 16:45:54thumbs up.realy enjoyed d storyanonymous readerReport 2013-07-22 18:29:21I like having golf bats xD. I agree with her 100%. HopefullAuthorHopefullAuthorReport 2012-10-30 23:58:13Hello Stranger92
I just finished reading your story, and I want to say that I loved it. I was enjoying the story so much it made me sad to reach that point. I love a good romantic story that has a happy ending and yours sure did.
