If you want your readers to not flee in disgust when suddenly reality is violated, then state from the beginning that your character will be “super.” Otherwise, when you state it later it seems like a cheap cop out.«12» The execution, however, is terrible. Pay attention to my criticism. Xnx 10 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-06-25 16:53:38I had to stop reading and give a neg rating when I got to the part with High School kis with DD tits and 10 inch cock.animal99Report 2013-03-23 00:45:09I liked your story because it’s plot showed a lot of promise. then reality breaks and stupidity sets in.kcrit42qReport 2012-10-04 23:34:29it was good but needs workanonymous readerReport 2012-10-04 23:08:13No. Stupidity and mediocrity continues to exist because we coddle the weak. If you want your readers to not flee in disgust when suddenly reality is violated, then state from the beginning that your character will be “super.” Otherwise, when
