Who is Kurk? calm down and read the story a few times before postinganonymous readerReport 2011-02-03 05:27:10draaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaggggggeeedddd it out too long. Xnx Starting off, to me it was so confusing, I didn’t even get deep into the story. Read.”mypenname3000, Tina Kerr 36, Louderthansound, to name a few to get the feel of what I’m trying to say to help you write better (for my slow mind). Starting off, to me it was so confusing, I didn’t even get deep into the story. Read.”mypenname3000, Tina Kerr 36, Louderthansound, to name a few to get the feel of what I’m trying to say to help you write better (for my slow mind). A reader shouldn’t have to read the story 2-3 times to learn the characters & their relationship to each other (including the 1st person telling the story).
