other then those things the story was ok 7/10«12» other then those things the story was ok 7/10«12» you also need to spell check. XXX It’s not beleiveable because the author pays no attention to the little details that make a story sound “real.” I give it a 3 but then I stpped reading it ager a couple paragraphs because it was boring.Anonymous readerReport 2008-07-15 16:29:10to the reader that posted b4 me, the babys could have been immature…my daughter was born after 5 1/2 months and it was in the hospital for 2 so dont write something that u dont know for a fact is true…Anonymous readerReport 2008-06-25 00:41:00kay, this story has slot of errors in it, like how the mother ate her daughters pussy but you didn’t take the tape offtill after?
