that was just bad.anonymous readerReport 2011-10-30 07:11:52STOP WRITTING! Xnxx Transforming a story in your head to a story in print is an art. that was just bad.anonymous readerReport 2011-10-30 07:11:52STOP WRITTING! Transforming a story in your head to a story in print is an art. It will allow you to see some of the tools of the language we call Standard English.anonymous readerReport 2011-11-02 12:39:17I’m not sure what word processing program you used to write the story with, but I would suggest that you use one with a grammar tool. There is a famous book called “Eats Shoots and Leaves” by Lynne Truss. It’s really bad, just stop.anonymous readerReport 2011-10-30 06:38:27i dont think it was that bad but could be better but please use the whole page when writing your story and i hope there is more to come , so dont stop writing but add a little something thats
