I rate both 7/10 and would have been higher except for the brevity of the individual stories.«1» I liked both stories and feel that except for length both are acceptable as stand-alone stories. I both the girl is safe in the end. XXX I am glad that she does not have thee perfact body and is described as thick. Further Charecter development as in what does Jack do for a living. Further Charecter development as in what does Jack do for a living. I liked both stories and feel that except for length both are acceptable as stand-alone stories. Also the development of Mary as herself and not just a Sexual being in both stories. Also the development of Mary as herself and not just a Sexual being in both stories. I am glad that she does not have thee perfact body and is described as
