Too short. Xnx 2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2010-06-25 17:26:45That was Hot abd Yes I want Part 2Anonymous readerReport 2010-05-11 22:48:21This is not a true story. Too short. If you want to write fiction, then label it as fiction!«1» Needs more depth. Its written by some high school guy! Needs more depth. 2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2010-06-25 17:26:45That was Hot abd Yes I want Part 2Anonymous readerReport 2010-05-11 22:48:21This is not a true story. Needs more depth. Too short. Needs more depth. Its written by some high school guy! Its written by some high school guy! Its written by some high school guy! 2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2010-06-25 17:26:45That was Hot abd Yes I want Part 2Anonymous readerReport 2010-05-11 22:48:21This is not a true story. 2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2010-06-25 17:26:45That was Hot abd Yes I want Part 2Anonymous readerReport 2010-05-11 22:48:21This is not a true story.
