Johnstranonymous readerReport 2013-10-16 19:47:13awesome story keep up the good work !!anonymous readerReport 2013-10-16 19:22:26Great story’s , can’t wait for the next part«1» I advise to take your time and don’t get in a hurry. Xnx You have left out important words and used some words incorrectly. You have left out important words and used some words incorrectly. Good luck. You have left out important words and used some words incorrectly. I advise to take your time and don’t get in a hurry. You have left out important words and used some words incorrectly. 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-10-21 01:52:19It’s a good and more mature version of war on Geminar.anonymous readerReport 2013-10-17 01:57:57I’m sorry to say but this is not an original it’s an anime show called Tenchi muyo war on Genimar.anonymous readerReport 2013-10-17 00:21:02You have a good story going. You need to do better editing.
