Make your stories longer, keep working on spelling and keep going with your descriptions of the action. Maybe you’re finally getting the message. XXX This was the most readable one I’ve read. Like I said in the comments of one of the others, you have a damned good imagnation. could have been a little longer 7/10READERReport 2007-07-08 15:20:00fucking right. Like I said in the comments of one of the others, you have a damned good imagnation. This was the most readable one I’ve read. could have been a little longer 7/10READERReport 2007-07-08 15:20:00fucking right. could have been a little longer 7/10READERReport 2007-07-08 15:20:00fucking right. Maybe you’re finally getting the message. This was the most readable one I’ve read. SSBAnonymous readerReport 2008-10-16 17:12:51pretty nice! 13 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2010-04-11 22:02:43needs some back ground to explain what thier relationship was like before college you don’t just wake up one morning and say i am
