Please desist from posting until you learn more about WRITING!!!anonymous readerReport 2012-12-22 09:50:08Liked alot 9/10 from meanonymous readerReport 2012-11-21 11:13:19Yeah i Was using a mobile phone to read this story kind of hard reading it When you double spacing it but however great story :)«123» You have spent a lot of time writing the 200+ stories on this site; no doubt you have improved, but, yes, there is still a lot of room for further improvement. To deny this and just stay like you are would be very sad.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-09 14:57:41Don’t you EVER proof-read your stuff BEFORE submitting it? Xnx You cinsistently double-space within a sentence. You’re stories are “NOW” 9.5/10 and as I’m about 1/2 way through them now I think they are getting better than they were before, as time progresses.Anonymous readerReport 2015-10-20 13:23:23Yeah, must agree about the double-spacing, spelling errors, poor grammar, but I DO LIKE
