39 comments«12345»Dudley DowrongReport 2019-04-25 02:58:19The system wouldn’t let me vote. Xnx “Time flies when Ur having fun” shows he was really having “fun”
with his sister. I’m looking forward to seeing how u develop the story line. He doesn’t need to learn so much ; just have confidence to go ahead & make a mistake rather than do nothing.. Don’t give up because of some of the stupid comments. No grammar, spelling, or tech issues that I caught. I think they are more a criticism of a 14 yr old inexperienced.Anonymous readerReport 2014-02-12 04:55:50I think that was great im looking forward to reading the rest!anonymous readerReport 2011-09-02 18:18:41ufucinsuckdickheadgofuckyourselfAnonymous readerReport 2009-03-19 22:42:06not a bad startOverfiendReport 2009-02-08 19:19:41Very good read, will keep on reading. Alicia should be confident enough to guide him to what she likes him to do to make her feel good.
