The plet/theme of the story is great, the characters play their parts were well, and the story is pretty much error free! 49 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2015-09-03 19:36:56Love the story and wish that it was longer. Xnx Although the story is very short (in my opinion) and rather quick and precise to the point, I am very pleased with the results, of which were instituted by Phoebes’ father’s war-enduced nightmares. Although the story is very short (in my opinion) and rather quick and precise to the point, I am very pleased with the results, of which were instituted by Phoebes’ father’s war-enduced nightmares. Who cared for his children during his tours from the family home? Some observations that would enhance the essence of the stories chronology and substance! The story theme and context is quick and jerky, as to his drunken-rage anger and quickly to a more caring,
