Don’t get discouraged.«1234» Paragraphs are necessary, by using about five sentences for EACH paragraph and/or the changing of the thought processes or using more quotes of conversation to break into paragrpahs. XXX Why did she get pregnant the first time with her eight year old daughter Sarina Marie by someone else?? 17 comments«1234»bigdaddyg123Report 2014-12-30 07:31:08″A Secret Brother And Sister’s Secret Romance”- Twenty-two Year Old Brother Sean and Twenty Year Old Sister Mary. Just because it is erotica doesn’t mean you can just put words together and be done. Read some of the higher percentage stories and see how they make the story real. The story is too short, probably because details and descriptions are lacking in quantity and volume! There are minimal grammatical errors. There are minimal grammatical errors.
