give back your high school diploma ( if you ever got one ) you don’t deserve it.anonymous readerReport 2013-07-19 21:40:31since you were taught to speak and write in german WHY THE HELL ARE YOU POSTING IN ENGLISH? Xnx USE YOUR HEAD FOR MORE THAN A SEAT CUSHION AND POST IN GERMAN OR USE AN ENGLISH EDITOR. AS IS THIS SUCKS BIG TIME AND NEEDS A TOTAL REWRITE AFTER DELETING THE ORIGINALS.anonymous readerReport 2013-01-14 14:22:57once again you totally ruined it by rushing the action. delete both stories and rewrite them properly. this needs major rewriting by a GOOD WRITER that knows enough to PROOFREAD and use a GOOD EDITOR before posting. they could both be posted as one chapter and need to be two or three times longer.anonymous readerReport 2013-01-10 01:11:12Is their going to be a part three«1234»
