However, I can’t stress this enough, character description is the difference between your “transgendered” boy or your “scrawny, frail” submissive boy. 8 comments«12»AnnistaysiaReport 2014-12-17 06:53:55I reread my previous comment and decided to post another to elaborate on something’s a little further. Xnx When I said it seems to me your Characters are Gay, I’m going off their Character interaction only. I see him as a boy with fairly feminine features, maybe a girlish ass. The majority of us know what a basic house and school layout is like, so there you’re fine. What makes these other male characters what to get their rocks off on and in him? Again, I’m not trying to be a Bitch in any way, I’m just critiquing your work to try to make you a better writer.AnnistaysiaReport 2014-12-17 06:37:22So, this is the third in the series.
