Grammar, spelling, and syntax are pretty rundown, and it inhibits the story. Basic stuff like this is dull, but still important.anonymous readerReport 2011-09-29 19:41:06great story, bit slow to get started but got better«1» 2 comments«1»BlackRoninReport 2011-10-25 05:12:26This is not bad, but sloppy. Xnxx 2 comments«1»BlackRoninReport 2011-10-25 05:12:26This is not bad, but sloppy. Basic stuff like this is dull, but still important.anonymous readerReport 2011-09-29 19:41:06great story, bit slow to get started but got better«1» 2 comments«1»BlackRoninReport 2011-10-25 05:12:26This is not bad, but sloppy. Basic stuff like this is dull, but still important.anonymous readerReport 2011-09-29 19:41:06great story, bit slow to get started but got better«1» 2 comments«1»BlackRoninReport 2011-10-25 05:12:26This is not bad, but sloppy. 2 comments«1»BlackRoninReport 2011-10-25 05:12:26This is not bad, but sloppy. Grammar, spelling, and syntax are pretty rundown, and it inhibits the story. Grammar, spelling, and syntax are pretty rundown, and it inhibits the story.
