You could have used “pushed her”, or “dragged her” to the table instead of “drug her”, drug is a narcotic, not a tense of the verb “to drag”. He’s talking about raping his daughter -Hello!!!!!old man 4Report 2009-10-17 16:33:35Great story. Xnx Might be a little bit forceful but I think a daughter would like it that way. Some comments, if you are interested: “of it’s confines”; “it’s” is a contraction of “it is”, the possessive “its” would have been correct usage. I like your stories, and we think they would be much better if you took the time to proofread them first. Might be a little bit forceful but I think a daughter would like it that way. Lol pun intended!anonymous readerReport 2012-04-02 17:31:15That’s what I’m talking about!!! And check the difference between “to” and “too”. Lol pun intended!anonymous readerReport 2012-04-02 17:31:15That’s what I’m talking about!!!
