Also, could do with some emotion ie hesitancy on the girls behalf. Xnxx 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-01-17 07:00:15Started well, but a bit rushed at the end. this is my first story and I would like to know what you thought about it, also leave some comments of what i should add in part 2, and tell me what you didnt like about the story, I made a typo so sorry about that btw!«1» 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-01-17 07:00:15Started well, but a bit rushed at the end. Also, could do with some emotion ie hesitancy on the girls behalf. Also, could do with some emotion ie hesitancy on the girls behalf. After all she is a virgin and committing incest. After all she is a virgin and committing incest.




















