If you enjoy writing i say keep going, the more you write the better you’ll get, but please listen to people who give you advice on your writing, the’re only trying to help you. Also sex scenes need to be expanded and have more detail, describe it more, say what there bodies look like, how the’re feeling that sort of thing, The thing with her friend was kind of strange. Xnx Yes you’re right i don’t submit stories. There was no build-up and no flow. There was no build-up and no flow. You really have to work on your writing. First of the story felt rushed. Yes you’re right i don’t submit stories. There was no build-up and no flow. Yes you’re right i don’t submit stories. I’m not going to tell you to stop writing like some people will.
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Kaoyodsex6 / Kaoyodsex7
