I think the bit with the daughter went too fast also. 2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-17 18:38:23btilliantAnonymous readerReport 2008-06-30 08:37:16While your action moves a bit too fast, I enjoyed the story very much. XXX It should have been played out as a girl would not get into sex as fast as she did even with Mom there. Also Mom gave in too quickly. 2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-17 18:38:23btilliantAnonymous readerReport 2008-06-30 08:37:16While your action moves a bit too fast, I enjoyed the story very much. Over all a good story but the plot needs work.«1» They should have seduced her slower. Also Mom gave in too quickly. They should have seduced her slower. I think the bit with the daughter went too fast also. They should have seduced her slower.
