I liked the writing. Mastering a woman might be better if the character did not try to destroy evidence and skulk out of the house like a coward. XXX perhaps. … perhaps. … I liked the writing. This is a fantasy story…right ? 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2010-11-28 10:59:56I liked the story. like your watching the action unfold, or are the mentioned roommate viewing the scene with surveillance equipment. keep up the nice work.bubblepopReport 2009-04-28 19:25:33you’ve done a great job on this nicely layed out
i would just love to be herseeminglysatisfiedReport 2008-12-08 17:28:18good job. like your watching the action unfold, or are the mentioned roommate viewing the scene with surveillance equipment. Mastering a woman might be better if the character did not try to destroy evidence and skulk out of the house like a coward.
