Aight? meh.Anonymous readerReport 2009-06-15 13:07:52that could have been a much better story if you had taken your time instead of rushing through it… XXNX This is just … meh.Anonymous readerReport 2009-06-15 13:07:52that could have been a much better story if you had taken your time instead of rushing through it… 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-06-15 05:36:57Yeah more details yo. Also add in some symbolism while you at it. This is just … Peacess!!!anonymous readerReport 2011-04-30 22:48:35ummmm…what the fuck was that?Anonymous readerReport 2009-07-11 12:47:12horribly writtenAnonymous readerReport 2009-06-15 18:40:02dear christ this is terrible. perhaps you could take some time and expand the story with more detail, (touch, sight, smell…)«12» 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-06-15 05:36:57Yeah more details yo. meh.Anonymous readerReport 2009-06-15 13:07:52that could have been a much better story if you had taken your time instead of rushing through it…
