1 comments«1»READERReport 2005-02-26 15:09:50Too fucking short, where is your imagination. Your story line is ok, but u need to develop and describe in more detail the feeling and actiions. XXNX And most of all, why are u fucking an ex-boyfreind? And most of all, why are u fucking an ex-boyfreind? Can’t you find a new one?«1» Your story line is ok, but u need to develop and describe in more detail the feeling and actiions. Can’t you find a new one?«1» Can’t you find a new one?«1» Your story line is ok, but u need to develop and describe in more detail the feeling and actiions. Your story line is ok, but u need to develop and describe in more detail the feeling and actiions. Your story line is ok, but u need to develop and describe in more detail the feeling and actiions.
