Invisible indeed!«12» But I think this story does need to go somewhere more. Xnxx Invisible indeed!«12» It’s not a bad effort and start though. 9 comments«12»READERReport 2008-02-17 20:44:28A few errors, and you really should have continued it, and you should write non-erotic in the tag section next time with a story like this.READERReport 2006-05-10 13:25:25Another excellent story by this author. You probably should write a Pt2 to ” Laurie” first though as it was your best effort and could easy have some followups. It’s not a bad effort and start though. But I think this story does need to go somewhere more. See yaREADERReport 2005-02-27 16:18:28What is the meaning of all of this. 9 comments«12»READERReport 2008-02-17 20:44:28A few errors, and you really should have continued it, and you should write non-erotic in the tag section next time with a story like this.READERReport 2006-05-10 13:25:25Another excellent story by this author.
