il- pam«12» “Strawberry”READERReport 2007-04-15 11:58:26I AM GOING TO TRY MY UNCLES BLAVK LAB I THINK MMMM. . XXX … If you write on this subject again, use a dog purchased from a kennel or a private owner to make it realistic.READERReport 2008-01-20 11:34:07You should proof-read your story in addition to running it through spellcheck. “Strawberry”READERReport 2007-04-15 11:58:26I AM GOING TO TRY MY UNCLES BLAVK LAB I THINK MMMM. . … You used “too” when you should have simply used”to” and “…soar (sic) pussy…” and “…now…” when you meant “know”, among other errors. If you write on this subject again, use a dog purchased from a kennel or a private owner to make it realistic.READERReport 2008-01-20 11:34:07You should proof-read your story in addition to running it through spellcheck.
