Ur use of paragraphs for conversational dialogue & ideas is “right on” or very good & makes for much easier reading, understanding, & easy flow of the story line. XXNX Looking forward to the following installments.anonymous readerReport 2013-10-24 11:49:52BgLHZZ A big thank you for your post.Really looking forward to read more. All the info in Ch 1 has well laid ground work for a tremendos scenario of good interpersonal relationship involving sexual excursions. LONG ENOUGH TO KEEP ME WAITING FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. Development of characters is as usual awesome. SO DON’T TEASE!«1» Development of characters is as usual awesome. 3 comments«1»Dudley DowrongReport 2018-07-15 13:58:14Great start. All the info in Ch 1 has well laid ground work for a tremendos scenario of good interpersonal relationship involving sexual excursions.
