It shows a plot and good story-telling skill. XXX Not to sound like some English teacher, but it needs some fleshing out. So fix you mistakes by proofreeading your future stories but don’t let anyone discourage you from writing more stories.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-25 20:41:26Ignore the poster who complains about an “English class.” He’s insufficiently literate, or he’d have heard the phrase “too short a time” along with “too short a season,” “too great a distance,” and so forth. It shows a plot and good story-telling skill. It shows a plot and good story-telling skill. The “of” is completely unnecessary. It shows a plot and good story-telling skill. I liked yyour story. The “of” is completely unnecessary. So fix you mistakes by proofreeading your future stories but don’t let anyone discourage you from writing more stories.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-25 20:41:26Ignore the poster who complains about an “English class.” He’s insufficiently
