The grammar issues especially will just turn off so many readers that they won’t care how good the story is. XXNX I’m really not exaggerating when I say that it’s that bad. Either become better or risk losing your own readers. Take your creations seriously as well. But if you keep going about your writing as you currently are, then you’ll never reach that potential. Don’t take the lazy way out and just make excuses all the time. My advice would be to start proofreading your work seriously. That’s really all I have to say about it. I’m really not exaggerating when I say that it’s that bad. 11 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2013-05-31 02:31:00really is deleting your account any better than being a coward?anonymous readerReport 2013-05-30 21:31:08My advice would be to not just blow off everything that I’m saying, either.
