Using the phrase “my brother so often” detracted from an other wise great story. Xnx loved it. Using the phrase “my brother so often” detracted from an other wise great story. Loved the storyREADERReport 2005-06-09 08:32:07Not bad. Using the phrase “my brother so often” detracted from an other wise great story. Other than that, it was a greeat story.READERReport 2005-09-24 14:37:15good story. My brothers were more adventurous than my husband but I am teaching him to be so. A bit of dialogue issues, and some proofreading stuff, but other than that, great. Also, why were two paragraphs repeated in the story.«12345» Also, why were two paragraphs repeated in the story.«12345» A bit of dialogue issues, and some proofreading stuff, but other than that, great. u overdid the incestuous lust bit!READERReport 2005-08-11 01:18:13Drty Dan’s a cockbite in his own.
