21 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2016-07-15 21:50:37Could use better proofreading. Xnx A good story, but it lacks thoroughness and explanations.jhm828Report 2015-07-23 21:06:39Yes enjoyed the story, would like to see part with the brother and the horse.Anonymous readerReport 2015-02-02 03:05:16This was a great sketch! That he felt himself familiar and entitled enough with her to use sex (forced) in a bargain, now that was pretty well done. That would have been a great start. 21 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2016-07-15 21:50:37Could use better proofreading. That would have been a great start. I like it that you didn’t reveal what her stepslut wanted, because that was not the point. A good story, but it lacks thoroughness and explanations.jhm828Report 2015-07-23 21:06:39Yes enjoyed the story, would like to see part with the brother and the horse.Anonymous readerReport 2015-02-02 03:05:16This was a great sketch! Just a bit more work needed otherwise good.«12345» I like it that you didn’t reveal what her
