Pleaseeeeee!anonymous readerReport 2011-08-25 06:57:06If you changed Harry with Draco or someone evil would be better for this kind of story. After all writers borrow ideas from each other all the time, even Rowling.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-25 15:44:34Since Hermione is not a virgin in this story, can you write a story of her first time? XXX After all writers borrow ideas from each other all the time, even Rowling.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-25 15:44:34Since Hermione is not a virgin in this story, can you write a story of her first time? After all writers borrow ideas from each other all the time, even Rowling.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-25 15:44:34Since Hermione is not a virgin in this story, can you write a story of her first time? The imperious curse(even a fake one) is very overused and also I happened to read a lot of similar stories with the exact same scenario. The writing was fantastic though.anonymous




















