[psssst… XXX that’s a good chap, now, run along and I shan’t make note of the one imperfection. 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-09-17 11:24:37really great story, more chapters please.anonymous readerReport 2011-03-31 08:51:49AMAZING!!! ^_^anonymous readerReport 2011-03-30 22:26:53AMAZING!!! ^_^anonymous readerReport 2011-03-30 01:08:06It’s the most perfect story I’ve read on this site in ages. I haven’t read a story like this in a long time, and I would be more than happy to read another chapter and more! :-)]anonymous readerReport 2011-03-28 23:04:11you copyrighted it, really
nice story though«12» Don’t know how that bugger slipped in there. 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-09-17 11:24:37really great story, more chapters please.anonymous readerReport 2011-03-31 08:51:49AMAZING!!! I look forward to more. I haven’t read a story like this in a long time, and I would be more than happy to read another chapter and more!
