It was a good story and i didnt notice any grammatical errors that were obvious enough to see them in one read without scanning for them. It was a good story and i didnt notice any grammatical errors that were obvious enough to see them in one read without scanning for them. XXX 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-07-26 22:46:18only a real ass would leave a story posted in this condition DELETE at once and rewrite it properly. Well thought out and well developed story-line. 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-07-26 22:46:18only a real ass would leave a story posted in this condition DELETE at once and rewrite it properly. The first commenter was a retarded jackass so just ignore him.
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