Run-on-writing, but clear and understandable. XXX Run-on-writing certainly needs paragraphs. Like, duh.notdescriptiveReport 2009-09-12 09:35:14I read it, understood it, enjoyed it. Run-on-writing certainly needs paragraphs. I’ll bet hubby is happy.h2o_skierReport 2009-09-12 07:50:33You’ve gotta be kidding. Run-on-writing certainly needs paragraphs. To the writer – paragraphs are necessary. Be patient when you post comments so you don’t re-write and re-submit the same fucking stuff! Keep writing. Sexy fun. Is that how people are being taught to write in school? I’ve posted here and had trouble making paragraphs; (to the author) just add in an empty line between paragraphs to create them. Nice story. Be patient when you post comments so you don’t re-write and re-submit the same fucking stuff! Is that how people are being taught to write in school? Is that how people are being taught to write in school?




















