8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2016-06-23 02:27:44this. Xnxx The second problem was that it became repetitive. dude, dont copy! My question for BLUEHEATT himself is, “Why are you re-posting some of your stories?”
This story was first posted on 06-22-2012, under the same title, almost verbatim, except for the last few lines of the ending.PenKnave193Report 2013-09-23 13:41:48On the whole not a bad story. Be my mom sis or daugher?:) texy 6025702936anonymous readerReport 2013-09-23 19:46:20Switching points of view between the characters is a technique this author uses in almost all of his stories. is. There was no change is style between the different characters. The second problem was that it became repetitive. Your stories are badly written rip offs of other much better authors.krc1993Report 2013-09-24 04:52:54Anu females age 18-45 wanna roleplay? dude, dont copy! It does get tedious at times trying to follow the story line.
