Snowleopard makes a good point, and don’t forget that it’s a good idea to have someone else read your work before you post it. Keep going. XXX I mean everything. We want to feel, smell and taste everything. I second the emotion of ending a sentence with a period, not a camma. You screwed up this part so bad that I will not read it anyway. If you know anyone who has some grammatical and spelling ability, ask him or her to proof-read your stuff BEFORE inflicting it on the public.anonymous readerReport 2012-06-19 21:27:11What the fuck? I second the emotion of ending a sentence with a period, not a camma. You screwed up this part so bad that I will not read it anyway. You’re too close to the action, as it were, to notice little things like continuity errors, word choice, and tenses.
