You have interesting, lovely dark-sided ideas, and are a good writer, but I feel you may need to spend a little more time fleshing them out into words. I look forward to reading more.andersvegReport 2013-05-23 12:08:56don’t mind the negative comments. XXNX keep writing!andersvegReport 2013-05-23 12:07:29drown her properly. Make the bitch suffer.«12» 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-03-24 22:26:10I was curious as to what necrophilia was. then rape her corpse while forcing water from her bloated abdomenanonymous readerReport 2013-05-23 08:26:52Nice story,needs to be longer with more tortures. I look forward to reading more.andersvegReport 2013-05-23 12:08:56don’t mind the negative comments. keep writing!andersvegReport 2013-05-23 12:07:29drown her properly. It takes practice. Well its sickening to me I have to much respect for life and to kill let alone defile the body makes me so angry.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-31 15:32:31Another good story, but again it suffers from a lack of detail and feels rushed.
