It’s also a cliff hanger which I personally don’t like. XXX I bet when you read these here stories you get stiffer than a peter on a weddin’ night! Read some books so that you can see just how a story should be written. Secondly, you used a comma where a semicolon belongs, and then didn’t add commas where they were needed. Secondly, you used a comma where a semicolon belongs, and then didn’t add commas where they were needed. For someone who calls himself(?) a grammar Nazi, you suck at English. First, it’s spelled ‘grammar’. You wouldn’t know a Redneck if one stepped up and kicked you in the ass idjit(sic)!!!!! For someone who calls himself(?) a grammar Nazi, you suck at English. It’s the grammar that’s bad. Now see there, I done learnt ya sumpin’ today.«123»
